You hear a soft push as the waves of the ocean ripple onto the sands shoreline. There in your right hand it an ice cold lemonade. It is so hot out the condensation is dripping off of the outside of the glass. You take a sip and the sweet tangy drink flows down your throat quenching your thirst. You look up but have to cup your hand over your eyes to look into the distance. You see a very attractive person so you decide to leave your chair and walk over. As your feet touch the sand you remember why you choose to sit in the first place. The sand id so hot you bolt right into the salt water. As you enter the waters, your cut on your leg begins to sting from the salt. You manage to somewhat gracefully make your way over to that attractive person. They smile and all of that difficulty is forgotten.
That is just an example of how the use of a word can really let you escape and imagine yourself in the scenerio. This was just a small example about how writing using your senses can really make the reader engage with the text. Although and style of writing is unique, I wanted to show how your senses can really help you connect.
Miss Schneider
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